Forever i will be Thankful To You and Proud to be your slave You are the one who gave me life led me to the straight path and toward the light
with your mercy and blessing I am a live
Good, Happy.and save life
,, You stand by me whenever i fall ,, No matter how many times I complain or forget to call
with your mercy and power i become strong , And I can see what i did wrong
For the joys i have in my life , letting me discover really life
For the dreams You make true
Forever I will be thankful To you
For the truth That i wouldn't see If you were not here beside me
For ever time my heart beats
I love you , and i wish that up in heaven we will meet
with the many mistakes i have done
i feel shame and want to run
should i beg,cry prostate or kneel
I am here in front of you my heart is open I have nothing to conceal
You are the one in my heart
That always make it bright
The one I always trust
Like nobody it is a must
How proud I am I would say
TO be your slave in everyway
That shows how much you mean to me
You are the i dream to see
No matter how much i do
It will never be enough to thank you
your forgiveness is what I always look for ،
I am certain that I will find it at the step of your door
By,, shahad.alf
It's really nice work. Actually, I'm impressed ;-)
ردحذفI liked the poetry touches, some grammatical errors here and there, but no harm :-p
You got what it takes, keep up the good work.
Looking forward for your new writing..
Best wishes..
BSQ,
ردحذفDon't Exaggerate too much ,is something normal I'm in my way to Improve my skill.
Promise You i will be more creative next time.